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Could some one who speaks English as their first language edit this shoet text please?

Hi everybody, I wanna put the following text on my website. So it must be fluent and a little formal. Please comment on it and rewrite it if it's necessary. Thank you in advance ************************* Godaddy.com offers the lowest cost personal web hosting service on the web. You will not pay for e-commerce/cart features if you don’t need them. This makes our quality and prices competitive. If you are going to set up a business website you can get your ecommerce/cart features at affordable prices besides general plan features. Don't trust dishonest claims like unlimited space/bandwidth. Pay just for your needed features, not useless claims. Our economy Windows/Linux plans (300 GB space, 3000 GB bandwidth) handle over 1,500,000 web pages and 5,000,000 monthly visitors! You can upgrade your plan any time. *************************

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1. looks good
2. sounds good
3. Godaddy.com offers the lowest cost personal web hosting service on the web. You will not pay for e-commerce/cart features if you don’t need them. This makes our quality and prices competitive. If you are going to set up a business website you can get your ecommerce or cart features at affordable prices besides general plan features. Don't trust dishonest claims like unlimited space or bandwidth. Pay just for your needed features, not useless claims. Our economy Windows or Linux plans (300 GB space, 3000 GB bandwidth) handle over 1,500,000 web pages and 5,000,000 monthly visitors! You can upgrade your plan any time.
4. its fine. the only part I didnt understand was " features at affordable prices besides general plan features" the besides makes no sense to me.
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6. ok
7. its all good, the only thing you had a problem with was your title :) short**
8. LMAO jerk using YA for free advertising. What a schmuck
9. Ok...this is going to be very similar to yours, adjusted to portray your company with clarity and precision. ******************************************************************************** Godaddy.com offers the lowest cost personal web hosting service on the web. You will not pay for e-commerce/cart features you don't need, increasing quality at competitive prices. If you are interested in a business website, we can provide e-commerce/cart features along with general plan features all at affordable prices. Pay only for the features you require. Our Windows/Linux plans (300 GB space/3000 GB bandwidth) can handle over 1.5 million web pages and 5 million visitors monthly! You can upgrade your plan at any time. Don't settle for false claims of unlimited space/bandwidth that don't provide you with the features you need. Get quality and productivity all at an affordable price.
10. Although what you have here is, for the most part, technically correct, it can use a little pizazz from a marketing stand point. I do professional SEO writing, and so I've given you a good example here. This is ready to go as it is, but if you'd like help with any changes, let me know. You can email me through Y!A. ******************** Godaddy.com offers the lowest cost personal web hosting service on the web. Other popular hosting services charge for features you may not even need, such as e-commerce/cart features. At Godaddy.com, we offer packages priced to suit your needs. You will never have to pay for features you don’t need. This enables us to offer you quality, tailored packages that are competitively priced. Many hosting services also make outrageous claims of unlimited space and bandwidth, but have included built-in fees to pay for the bandwidth. Godaddy.com offers you the chance to pay only for your needed features, without making useless claims. Our economy Windows and Linux Plans offer 300 GB space with 3,000 GB of bandwidth, and are able to handle over 1,500,00 web pages and 5,000,000 monthly visitors! Of course, if you are going to set up a business website, you can still get your ecommerce/cart features at affordable prices in addition to the general plan features. You also have the freedom to upgrade your plan at any time. ETA: Shane posted at the same time I did. That's really good too :)